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Review: The Rainbow Maker’s Tale, Melanie Cusick-Jones




The sequel to Hope’s Daughter  follows Balik’s storyline through the same events of the first book, told from his POV.


It’s an interesting choice for a sequel, and it fills in a lot of the blanks from the first book. I really liked Balik’s logical self-sufficient approach to life, and his approach to solving problems. He learns that trusting someone isn’t a weakness, but a strength – indeed, towards the end of the book, Cassie has to save him.


The world building was as strong as Hope’s Daughter, and this time we got to see more of the way the station worked. At the climax of the book, there’s a brutal torture sequence that makes me glad I’ve never upset the author enough to be interrogated by her!


It’s obvious Cusick-Jones has done her homework on medical and technological procedures – all the technology and biological information seem logical and consistent with what’s going on.


The pacing was good as well, the characters always on the move and the chapters never lingering too long.


It did suffer a little though, from knowing what was going on in Hope’s Daughter, and knowing how it played out. Although the books can be read in any order, you really need to read Hope’s Daughter first. For instance, the characters mention The Collective, which won’t mean anything if you hadn’t read HD.


There were a few typos that caught my eye as well – the most jarring was when Cassie says her friends have gone to the retirement quarter, not the marriage quarter, and there were a few run-on sentences that needed full stops and not commas – but nothing too major.


Looking forward to seeing where Cusick-Jones goes with the next book in the series!


Review: Ender’s Game



In fighting monsters, do we become monsters?


It’s the theme of this fascinating book from Card. The writing is fluid and the characters dynamic and evolving.


Taken from his home at the age of 6, Ender Wiggins is trained to be a killer, a killer without remorse or pity. Terrified of turning into the bullying brother he hates, Ender is able to turn his anger to fighting in mock battles in battle school, where a generation of children and teenagers are being trained to fight for the survival of humanity. At any cost to themselves, psychologically and physically.


The battles are fake and no one gets hurt, but that doesn’t stop Ender from being bullied and suffering psychologically. He responds brutally, without mercy…only feeling remorse when he’s finished.


In some ways, Ender reminded me of the literary James Bond. Bond would fight quickly and efficiently; not enjoy doing it, but doing it because he had to in order to survive, and doing it to the best of his ability. Only Ender is a child, and the stress nearly pulls him apart.


One of the problems of the book is that Ender never sounds like a six year old boy. We’re told he’s a super genius, but I don’t think any super genius would be that mature. There’s a political subplot dragged in involving Enders sister and brother, but mostly it seems to be there for padding. What’s interesting about it is the way they go about it – they go online (The book was written in 1985) and set up sock-puppet accounts, each holding different opinions and written in a different style.


The biggest problems start when Ender graduates to proper military training. I won’t give away the spoiler, but the ending seemed rushed. 95% of the way through the book, a super weapon is mentioned in passing that has never been talked about before. It’s dropped so casually in the conversation, I thought I’d skipped a page. Half a page later, it happens again. “It will go straight through the Ecstatic Shield.” Oh, that’s all right then. So what is an Ecstactic Shield, since no one has ever talked about one before?


The epilogue seemed a little strained and too long as well. If the book had ended a chapter after the climax, it would have worked better. Instead Card seems to struggle to shoehorn in extra plots to work up to a sequel.